Slow Saunter

07/01/2012 at 22:17 (haiku, Life, poetry)
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Disregard chatter

Meant to torment frailty

Disquieting rust

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10 Comments

  1. wizmoto said,

    08/01/2012 at 21:06

    To me, the first part is about gossip and bullying. The last line… well, I think the rust is resistance to change, and change brings the disquiet.

  2. Aurora, HSP said,

    08/01/2012 at 16:46

    I am the frailty
    Their chatter roars
    Through rustiness that should have long since been repaired.

    Thank you.
    Janice

    • Slowmoto said,

      09/01/2012 at 21:10

      Aurora, Sometimes I wonder if you are my next door neighbor. You seem to understand my existence. Thank you for commenting.

  3. totsymae1011 said,

    08/01/2012 at 12:30

    That one went clean over my head.

    • Slowmoto said,

      09/01/2012 at 21:07

      I started writing about one experience and ended up re-living another, so I understand the confusion. Thank you for reading and commenting.

  4. Thomas Davis said,

    08/01/2012 at 11:12

    The experience is more important than the chatter, but can be disquieting. And yet the tractor rusting in the field with growth all around it speaks of a long breath of life on earth. The second time I looked at the post and read the haiku, it appealed to me more than the first time.

    • Slowmoto said,

      09/01/2012 at 21:06

      I agree, the experience is more important than the chatter; and can be more threatening or enlightening. Thank you, Thomas, for giving the haiku a second read and for commenting.

  5. Caddo Veil said,

    08/01/2012 at 03:36

    Oh wow! This is Good–I Really like it! And the picture. God bless you today.

    • Slowmoto said,

      09/01/2012 at 21:03

      Thanks Caddo! Bless you too. Sherry


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