Survive a clouted heart?
Build another chamber.
Allow another tenant?
When choosing; be wiser.
08/01/2012 at 22:39 (Life, poetry)
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Survive a clouted heart?
Build another chamber.
Allow another tenant?
When choosing; be wiser.
dougsdesk said,
29/01/2012 at 20:23
Boarder-Free verse. Good job Charlie Brown keep it up . Every cold hearted Landlord should read your poem. Good stuff. – Doug.
Aurora, HSP said,
18/01/2012 at 18:44
Oh. This resonates with me right now. But I am afraid I cannot know what I do not know until I know it. Makes me fear choices made thought well. When only time will tell
latebloomerbuds said,
12/01/2012 at 10:18
An interesting and thoughtful combo for sure. Margie
Slowmoto said,
14/01/2012 at 22:45
Thanks Margie!
The Background Story said,
12/01/2012 at 07:21
Succinctly put
Slowmoto said,
14/01/2012 at 22:47
Thank you for taking the time and commenting on my poem!
Caddo Veil said,
10/01/2012 at 19:42
Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow, Sherry! This is so good–wise word, concise, and I like the image too!
Slowmoto said,
14/01/2012 at 22:50
Thanks, Caddo! I started this poem with one thought and ended up blending many.
Sunshine said,
10/01/2012 at 17:22
Interesting… I like it
Thanks!
Slowmoto said,
14/01/2012 at 22:50
Thank you for stopping by to read my poem and commenting!
Thomas Davis said,
09/01/2012 at 22:41
You make me smile, Slowmoto. Sometimes you make me smile.
Slowmoto said,
10/01/2012 at 08:52
Thank you Thomas! I am pleased I was able to evoke an emotion, especially a smile.
wizmoto said,
09/01/2012 at 22:23
I love the picture, thanks.
Slowmoto said,
10/01/2012 at 08:45
Thanks!
pointsthruprose said,
09/01/2012 at 22:05
Very clever, I like this one.
Slowmoto said,
10/01/2012 at 08:48
Thank you!
Susan Michaels said,
09/01/2012 at 20:59
brilliant!
Slowmoto said,
09/01/2012 at 21:23
Thanks Susan!
belfastdavid said,
09/01/2012 at 08:46
*Wry Smile*
How often to I have to tell myself that?
David
Slowmoto said,
09/01/2012 at 21:27
I believe the question is: “When will I start listening to myself.” David, you always bring a smile to my face. Thank you for reading my blog and commenting. Sherry
belfastdavid said,
10/01/2012 at 09:41
I believe you are right
*Wry smile* again
David