Silent Release

Painting by Slowmoto

Scrutinizing a relic’s heyday

Plummeting from lulling sway

Security abandoned to journey on

Earth’s trembling harmonic song

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Caddo Veil said,

22/02/2012 at 21:11

Hello, my friend–Just stopped by to give you the Mrs Sparkly Award!! Come on by for a look when you have time. God bless you today, and always.
GrowthLines... said,

05/02/2012 at 22:52

I am pleased to share the ABC award with Slowmoto.Me! You can read about the award at the GrowthLines blog. I would love to have you join in, but please don’t feel obligated. ~ Paulann

http://growthlines.wordpress.com/2012/02/05/singing-my-abcs/
claudia said,

03/02/2012 at 09:25

i wish i were always brave enough to swing with earth’s harmonic song…beautifully penned
totsymae1011 said,

03/02/2012 at 08:33

I second Caddo’s words. Every word perfectly placed.
Caddo Veil said,

02/02/2012 at 22:49

I love this, I really love this–every word and line!
Slowmoto said,

02/02/2012 at 19:33

I think we still take chances as adults, just not ones that may end in surgery. Thanks for commenting!
Thomas Davis said,

01/02/2012 at 16:09

Beautifully written with few words– the coming down from swinging in the air. Ethel
- Slowmoto said,
  
  02/02/2012 at 19:31
  
  Thanks, Ethel. I enjoyed painting the picture and the poem wrote itself.
belfastdavid said,

31/01/2012 at 06:25

The days of childhood
before we learnt about fear;

sadly long gone

David

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