29/01/2012 at 22:57 (ICE, Life, poetry)
Tags: Arts, Blog, Earth, etegami, free verse, Haiku and Related Forms, lull, Oil paint, Paint, painting, poetry, release, security, sway, tremors, Water
Scrutinizing a relic’s heyday
Plummeting from lulling sway
Security abandoned to journey on
Earth’s trembling harmonic song
22/02/2012 at 21:11
Hello, my friend–Just stopped by to give you the Mrs Sparkly Award!! Come on by for a look when you have time. God bless you today, and always.
05/02/2012 at 22:52
I am pleased to share the ABC award with Slowmoto.Me! You can read about the award at the GrowthLines blog. I would love to have you join in, but please don’t feel obligated. ~ Paulann
03/02/2012 at 09:25
i wish i were always brave enough to swing with earth’s harmonic song…beautifully penned
03/02/2012 at 08:33
I second Caddo’s words. Every word perfectly placed.
02/02/2012 at 22:49
I love this, I really love this–every word and line!
02/02/2012 at 19:33
I think we still take chances as adults, just not ones that may end in surgery. Thanks for commenting!
01/02/2012 at 16:09
Beautifully written with few words– the coming down from swinging in the air. Ethel
02/02/2012 at 19:31
Thanks, Ethel. I enjoyed painting the picture and the poem wrote itself.
31/01/2012 at 06:25
The days of childhood
before we learnt about fear;
sadly long gone
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